Most people might know me as a shy person. That could be true; but not when I’m on stage. I love to dance every time get the chance. I also spend most of my time sining up for talent shows. The music that I dance to the most is my favorite singer, Michael Jackson. He is someone that I look up to.
I think that your story is great even though it is short and has multiple errors it really shows who u are.
Wow, I never knew that you were shy.; You are always out on the stage dancing to Michael Jackson songs. You can almost always get a chance to dance.